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Asma M. Ahmad Junior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 19 |
WAITING Standing here in a corner, Watching people hurrying by, Trying hard not to stare. Walking up and down a little, As if i'm busy like everyone else, As if i'm really calm and collected, And wouldn't ever scream aloud. I lean against a marble wall, It's coolness seeping through my back, Watch a child slurping candy, And plan how you'll say you're sorry, How i'll turn and walk away, So you'll come running after me, You'll plead with sad distraught eyes, Then when i grudgingly relent.... But it's too late to do that now, You're standing there with that arrogant smile, And my feet that won't listen to me, Are already moving fast towards you! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Lovely! A nice piece of poetry... could imagine your mind asking your legs to go one way, but the heart commanding the other way... and Yes, WELCOME TO PASSIONS and while I hope you stay here forever, ENJOY your stay as much as you can...  Regards, sudhir Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~A very nice poem...Great Job~ Blessed Be, beth |
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EroseGrover Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 44SD,CA 92126 |
That was a fantastic poem! Keep them coming Welcome to passions!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hey there  this was a great read, really enjoyed it.Welcome to passions Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Asma~ Welcome to Passion's. Enjoyed your entry. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is a wonderful entry to our Passionate forums - Welcome aboard - and check your email for a special greeting..  |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Welcome to this wonderful family of poets!! Great first post...keep em coming!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Asma M. Ahmad Junior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 19 |
Hey everyone,Thanks! I'm glad i'm here Sudhir,i know i'll enjoy myself! Erose Beth Tracie Marge Thankyou for your kindness Nan ,I was unable to recieve your poetry card but i appreciate the gesture. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Loved reading this poem...reminded me of a scene in a Julia Roberts movie...good visual and action poetry...James |
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