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slipknot
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 25


0 posted 2000-07-12 02:56 AM


Hi Lisa,
my name's Matt
I just met you last week
while at Kari's party I sat
you're a very cool chick
that I want to know better
things seemed good
then why am I writing this letter
We've hung out a few times
with a constant smile on my face
yet I wait for my phone to ring
to it I race
but wait it's not you
why not
it's you I want to open my heart up to
it seems like finally
you might be the one
who would listen to what I feel
to help my pain feel a lot less real
but you are out and about
with all of your friends
having fun
living up life
I call but you're not there
so I'll sit with some beer and a pizza
please call me Lisa!



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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2000-07-13 06:01 AM


Nice thoughts composed into a pretty nice poem...so thats what I'm supposed to be doing while I'm waiting for Lena to call...pizza and beer...not me...I'm outof here...answering machine...don't be so mean...James
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