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ma miller
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 806


0 posted 2000-07-11 10:47 PM


DREAMS WHITER STILL ...

Lofty stallions of our dreams;
White coats and whiter manes;
Run wild across sky's expanse;
Chasing mares of our stratosphere.

Bouncing balloons of our dreams;
White bunches and whiter tails;
Float lazy across blue hues;
Rising opals of our atmosphere.

Heavy anvils of our dreams;
White metal and whiter irons;
Drift heavy across auzure's canvas;
Sinking into hungry horizons afar.

Royal queens of our dreams;
White robes and whiter scepters;
Soar bejeweled across purple's majesty;
Ascending to jet stream's imperial throne.

Left to our dreams to color them all;
Yet heaven's white to be whiter still;
From our dreams we wake, only to gleam;
Clouds of our days be real as they seem.


M.A. Miller
07.11.00




[This message has been edited by MA Miller (edited 07-13-2000).]

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Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2000-07-12 01:06 AM



  This was wonderful........so vivid, and
    colorful.....

       Have I wished you a hearty welcome?
          I see you're new here, too...

    Love your work!!



Life is but a dream...



ma miller
Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806

2 posted 2000-07-13 08:50 AM


Thanks sunny ... I'm enjoying reading you work, as well ...
Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
3 posted 2000-07-13 10:32 AM


MA Miller,

This is a beautiful poem indeed...
-----
Soar bejeweled across purple's majesty;
Ascending to jet stream's imperial throne.
...
From our dreams we wake, only to gleam;
Clouds of our days be real as they seem.
-----

I am really getting to like your poems...

regards, and keep writing,
sudhir

ma miller
Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806

4 posted 2000-07-13 10:55 AM


Thank you Sudhir ... If you get a chance, I'd love to get your thoughts on "Summer's Dream Adrift ..."

I'm on a dream kick ... thanks again.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
5 posted 2000-07-13 11:23 AM


Lofty stallions of our dreams;
White coats and whiter manes;
Run wild across sky's expanse;
Chasing mares of our stratosphere.

Now that is the way to dream.  Loved it......gotta love it!

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