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Visions Of Tomorrow |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sitting there in the park It slowly begins to get dark Her mind starts to wander There are so many things to ponder A gentle wind blows As her eyes slowly close Scenes play through her mind She's not sure what she'll find Darkness evolves into light The sunrise is an awesome sight A rainbow appears in the distance What a reward for her persistence The scent of spring is in the air Colorful flowers abound everywhere Fluffy white clouds fill the sky A beautiful butterfly floats on by Her thoughts continue to flow To the visions of tomorrow They abound in her dreams In her eyes they put a gleam Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
YES YES YES there is a tomorrow...this lifeted my spirits and made me feel good inside. Thank you. |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Lovely thoughts, LW  MagnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Well, would you look at that. I get up to get a drink and *bam*,...you unleash this beautiful display of rays of hope and desire and dedication and huge positive messages. I Do love it. I'm sitting in that park with her...getting stronger every day. *Peace. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ I just love a good ponder in the park ! The rainbow promise is so full of hope. You go girl ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ I just love a good ponder in the park ! The rainbow promise is so full of hope. You go girl ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
That was really beatiful! It was almost like I was there... Sauni |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Lone Wolf, Truly magnificent writing... gives so much of hope to the reader... Well done, my friend, and many regards, sudhir |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I love the title...and the poem is just as beautiful! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Paula . . . You're welcome and there will always be a tomorrow. MB . . . Thank you!! SF . . . Just had to give you something positive to read while you were still feeling mighty!! LOL. I knew you'd love it. I know you are my friend.  Marge . . . The park is a wonderful place isn't it? Love those rainbows!! I am going believe me!!! Saunni . . . Welcome to Passions!! Thanks for reading. Exactly what I was going for. You're there too. Sudhir . . . Thank you very much my friend. Hope is plentiful these days. Lizzie . . . I thought it was a great title so I just has to do something with it. Happy you enjoyed it. Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Leaps and bounds My friend  |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A wonderful vision you have given here! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
no more pain no more sorrow looking ahead with hope to borrow better days are on the horizon of tomorrow lovely LW...ya cant go wrong with those butterflies loved this one later-high-hopes-gator jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I believe it was Scarlett in Gone With the Wind who said " Tomorrow is another day!" It it always is.... Great writing LW Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful Lone Wolf ... so picturesque, this was just a lovely verse! Best wishes, /Kit |
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