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EroseGrover
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since 2000-07-09
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0 posted 2000-07-11 07:25 PM


motionless I sit
dwelled in your warmth
your sweet kiss
leaves me breathless
and without a taste

essences captivate
my imagination deeper
every time

the precision of your heart
growes deeper everyday

as I bid the day adiu
and wish the night welcome
You say "I love you"
and as do I



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Martini
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2000-07-11 07:27 PM


Isn't love wonderful!!!

It's the greatest feeling in the world... It wraps you up so that almost nothing else seems important!!

Great poem

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-07-11 09:03 PM


ERose~
A lovely read.
Welcome to the wonderful world of Passionate Poets.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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