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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada 
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The stereo blasting - Guns n'Roses interesting, thinking of guns and roses together there is a line in one song "funny how everything was roses while we held onto our guns" If only more could really hear that Plastic covers everything As we try to cover the hunter green walls with the freshness of sunbeam yello we reminisce of the days when Guns n'Roses were our idles amazing the choices of young adolecence The paint splashes As I shake the ladder while almost plumetting We laugh uncontrollably unawaew of the mess we made She walks over to me, smiles, and laughs again The stereo blasting - "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" ~Robert Frost |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Martini.... I had such fun reading this! (Guns 'n Roses would be good music to paint to...but it's gotta be loud!!!!!!!!!) Nice job here---but how did the room turn out?????? Life is but a dream... |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
I'm glad you had fun reading this one... The room looks good, although there's a little yellow pain on the carpet in one corner hehehe Thanks |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
Sounds like you had way too much fun painting. Wonderful poem, you made me smile. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh this is such a wonderful read, very good imagery...just loved it  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
I don't know about back then, I still listen to it now, this was a great poem, I have fun reading this kind of poem as it is the kind of thing I would do . Loved it . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Jan I'm happy that it made you smile... Painting should always be fun.. otherwise it's far too serious.  Tracie, Thanks for the kind words... Tom, I'm so glad you could relate.... Gn'R is something I still drag out now and then for a great listen... Thanks for the support."In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" ~Robert Frost |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Martini, it reads like a frozen moment in time, still with a life feel. I really enjoyed reading it. Parker |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hey, you two feel like painting a mural. I have a huge wall that I could use some help with.LOL Great read and fun to boot. |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Parker and Mark Thank you both for the replys... sure anytime mark, however i can't guarantee no paint will end up on the floor!! hahaha |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep, I like those poems where you have fun doing something in life that you really don't want or care to do, but when you have someone to do it with, it's a little more easy. nice writing |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sounds like a good day to me! |
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