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ma miller
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since 2000-07-11
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0 posted 2000-07-11 01:00 PM


FFFFF...

Flocking fools, flooding feverishly for folly;
Finding freedom from fun's flamed fire.
Friendships formed for frequent fondling;
Finding faults forever from farce's festivities.

Flocking fools, fermenting fruit for frolic;
Finding fertile fancy from fluid flows.
Feasting fatties foraging for fresh flesh;
Finding fantasy floating forever free.

Flocking fools, flattering for fascination;
Finding felicity from fraudulent fashion.
Falsehood's family fetching fondness;
Finding friction's fight from few.

Flocking fools, falling far for fame;
Finding fortune from feeble foibles.
Faking favors for fawning followers;
Finding failure's firm foundation forever.


M.A. Miller
06.26.00

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MagnoliaBlue
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since 2000-05-12
Posts 367

1 posted 2000-07-11 01:07 PM


Well FFFFF...I like this,MA. LOL

I didn't know there were
so many F words.  

Enjoyed your humor and
your writing.

Welcome !

MagnoliaBlue


~My Skipper Jim
I love you!
Your Lady June~

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
2 posted 2000-07-11 01:07 PM


Farn it, Fark!  Fou've fot fy fongue fung up in a fury of F's!  *Needles to say, there is no way I'm going to carelessly choose words for what I just said - lol.
Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
3 posted 2000-07-11 01:09 PM


Fascinatingly flying feathers float free
Fantastic fluid fall from flowers
Fun, frolic followed feast fantastic
.... anyway time to stop myself from going overboard...

but what we have from you is simply fantastic...

fabulous frenzy indeed!

playful with words are you?
regards, sudhir

[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 07-11-2000).]

ma miller
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 806

4 posted 2000-07-11 01:13 PM


Thanks again for reading ... I just hope the true meaning of what I was trying to say didn't get lost in the playful use of "F" words ... I'm working on a similar piece for each letter of the alphabet ... Thanks again ... There are so many good poets here, hard to break away from the good readings ...
Jan
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 114

5 posted 2000-07-11 01:17 PM


Fun!  Great poem, the message was definately not lost in the F!  Looking forward to G!
Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
6 posted 2000-07-11 01:47 PM


ROFL-This was so much fun.  I won't even attempt the play with words; it wouldn't compare.   However, I will give you one of my favorite "F" words.  'FANTASMAGICAL"

[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 07-11-2000).]

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