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ma miller
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 806


0 posted 2000-07-11 12:23 PM


A LIFE'S PRAYER ...

In the pouring out of my soul;
Words found, but fall so short.
How can this blessing be said;
Through thankfulness without an amen.
For prayer's ending too final;
Let infinity's demise be as complete.

Hope not the pouring takes its toll;
But, forever drink from its passionate cup.
'Til that dark specter visits me at last;
Come to empty my well with blackest black.
Be heaven's blessing to fill my feathered quill;
Spirit's ink never to dry -- Never to die.

My only desire, to be heard by future's ear;
My eternal fire, to be stoked by spoken word.
More than a life's wish -- A life's prayer;
Said each day in hopes of truth's blessing.
May my children's children come to know;
I will write, in death as in life, forever.


M.A. Miller
06.12.00


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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
1 posted 2000-07-11 12:25 PM


Of course we allow, with such wonderful writing, you may post as many as you want...

Let them all come this way...

regards, sudhir...

P.S. and please do a bit of reading also and see what others have to offer. There are some amazing poets out here, and I hope that you will enjoy reading their work...  


Death, be not proud, though some have called thee,
Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so;

- John Donne

ma miller
Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806

2 posted 2000-07-11 12:31 PM


Thank you Sudhir ... I must have read and commented on at least a dozen works before posting my own ... This is a much more positive site than what I'm used to ... I will be pleased to read your work, as well ... Thanks for the warm welcome ...
Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
3 posted 2000-07-11 12:39 PM


I am extremely glad that you share that view of this site.... Enjoy your place here in this family...

regards, sudhir

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-07-11 12:43 PM


Yes, as Sudhir said; post all you want.  These first two are lovely.  As he also said please read a bit here and there.  The poets here are filled with talent in every style and I for one have found much inspiration here.  I am newer to this than you.  I have only been at it for around a month.  I do feel that I am getting somewhat better thanks to all the wonderful works I have read and all the inspiration from my new friends. Enough rambling.  Enjoyed this much
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

5 posted 2000-07-11 01:11 PM


My only desire, to be heard by future's ear;
My eternal fire, to be stoked by spoken word.
More than a life's wish -- A life's prayer;
Said each day in hopes of truth's blessing.
May my children's children come to know;
I will write, in death as in life, forever.
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this is exceptional writing...truly
spoken by a born poet.
excellent work.
yes this place is very positive and encouraging..
and we all inspire each other...
we're glad you found your way here.
take care
jm

I think I could need - this in my life
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
there's a little bit of something me
In everything in you
MB20

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
6 posted 2000-07-11 02:04 PM


A deep passionate weave from the heart of
a poet...there is nothing better~  This was
beautiful work~

ma miller
Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806

7 posted 2000-07-11 02:07 PM


Thank you butterfly ... My spirit is freshened and cleansed since I started to write 3 months ago ... So motivating to find this site ...
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