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Your eyes |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada 
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I saw in your eyes Someone I did not see I say in your eyes The person you saw in me I could see the person I had always wanted to be I saw in your eyes Someone I did not see I had never been loked at With such love and devotion I saw in you eyes Me without all the comotion The time changed you The look was not there I could no longer see All you love and care For a short wonderful while I saw all I wanted to see I saw in your eyes The person I wanted to be |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This is a treasure. I truely believe that love's truth is in the eyes. Through Your Eyes Through your eyes... I see much The depth of your soul The secrets of your heart Through your eyes... I feel all The warmth of your touch The gentleness of your kiss Through your eyes... I have love Sharing our breath Merging our hearts Through your eyes... I tell all My life given over To my trust in you Through your eyes... I offer this The respect as one The truth in love Through your eyes... I give to you The passage to me Through my eyes Mark Bohannan Too bad that time takes that away sometimes. |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Mark You response was beautiful... Thank you It is heart wrenching that love does not always last, but it is something that helps us grow I suppose. |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
I felt these feelings before myself, but I could never have expressed them as well. Beautiful work. I look forward to reading more from you. |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
It was a beautiful poem....I never expected this ending...we find the right person only after being with wrong person/persons. sincerely a_l |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Jan thanks so much  a_l Thanks for the praise I can only hope that right person is out there somewhere, because I thought I had found him!! |
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