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One Moment, Please
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One Moment, Please |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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One Moment, Please ~*Marge Tindal*~ If you'll take one moment to look within the heart you wear perhaps you'll see the loving things that I see written there A kind and loving heart always there for a friend Loving, kind and gentle Loyal to the end You do not disappoint me with acts or deeds undone It seems the friend I needed is just who you've become I always knew you had it in you though you found it hard to believe The friend that I love is just about perfect to me |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Ahhhh.....if they would only listen and see what we see  Wonderfully done sweet Marge~ |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
awesome work.... if only our friends could believe |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautiful....just beautiful my dear.  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Perfection personified by a pretty presentation Marge, enjoyed this one immensely... Many regards sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ Yes - and we can convince them with our love in return. Thank you. Martini~ Thank you for the sweet reply. MarkB~ I thank you very much. Sudhir~ Beauty is found in the heart of a friend. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
What you give, sweet Marge, should come around to you with more friends then most. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, Marge, I looked inside my heart And - guess what?- you were there!! Then I checked other body parts And you were everywhere! I looked deep inside my eyes And saw your image true Then looked inside my nose and smelled The fragrance that is you. I turned left at my temple And went down into my ear.. That wondrous voice from your sweet lips Was all that I could hear. You've handed out so very much, You little Indian giver I have no doubt I'd find you if I went inside my liver!  My kidney moves at your command My lungs breathe so much faster. Adrenalin pumps so fast for you I'm headed for disaster! You're my pulse and you're my heartbeat.. You're hairs standing on my arms. You're the kneecaps that I bend on To salute your many charms. You're the fingerprints on things I touch. The smile upon my lips. You're the wiggle in my maximus And swivel in my hips. You're the taste buds in my mouth, my dear, That makes all things taste sweet, The straightness in my spine and also Lightness in my feet. There you have it, Marge. All organs Whisper out your name For you are deep inside my body (wish that I could say the same ) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Humph. I can only ditto all of the above, and wish I had seen this first! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Kudos Marge.. and LOL@Bal...Cheeky devil...*g*HUSG |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
*yes im still here* =) hi marge, found me on this one, all too familiar, and beautiful thanks for this gift |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marge...... Today I was needing, and I found your words. Thank you for putting them there to find. You must have a true heart to reach out like you do. Life is but a dream... |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Marge, There is no way that this screen is big enough for your heart. Doc |
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EroseGrover Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 44SD,CA 92126 |
That is a fantastic poem!I loved it keep it up! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ When I can give a friend the confidence to 'see' what I see ... I give gladly and am rewarded so richly in return. Karilea~ LOL ! Wait 'til I get to 'him'. RainbowGirl~ 'Cheeky' is right ! !  Kevin~ Hello cutie pie ! You need to STAY around. Thank you, doll ! Sunny1~ My heart does reach out - and I'm never disappointed in the friends it finds for me to love. Thank you. DrMoose~ Thank you for such a sweet comment. EroseGrover~ Thank you and welcome to Passion's. Sometimes ... some of us are a little whacky .... see Balladeer below ! ! To 'lay' within your heart would surely suit me fine - for your eyes reflect the fact that you're a friend of mine. The fragrance of White Shoulders is what you're sniffing when you nibble on my ear and stick your tongue right in. I'll pass on your kidney and the by-product of the same - And ain't no liver-bellied lover gonna play this romantic dame. I'll gladly take your pulse and when we're standing at Niagra ... I'm betting you last l o n g e r on your new dose of Viagra !  *Okay ... you asked for it ! And if you say please - you just might get it ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
That friend sounds like a keeper! Beautiful poem, Marge! Denise |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marge, Words that I read, fit to be written, as they are written by someone with much insight. Very nice Marge. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Wonderful writing my friend. What a thing to treasure . . . true friendship. It is more precious than all the gold in the world. I love this one!! You always write about the neatest things. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ A keeper in my heart for sure ! Thank you. Bill~ Thank you for the kind reply. LoneWolf~ Within my heart shines the 'gold' of many friends ... Oh, how they shine ! Thank you again for your sweet, sweet comments. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
OH Marge what beauty is written here in this for a wonderful friend....love this Love to you Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is so lovely, Marge!!! The heart of a friend is the most beautiful creation on God's earth. How wonderfully you have expressed this. Love ya! Love and hugs, Lizzie  Pssst, Tracie: Thanx for bumping this one to the top...too good to miss  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ I'm just tickled that you enjoyed it. Friends are so special ! Lil' Lizzie~ You are one little friend that has curled up in your own corner of this lady's heart. Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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