My daughters soul(for Meghan)

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Open Poetry #8

My daughters soul(for Meghan)

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-07-10 05:02 PM

Some summer it had been
The rays of sun that fell
Gave us all that good feeling
The one, thats before it all.
And of my sweet Meghan
As she did play in the water
These lazy days of summer
That would never again be.
Her words to her mother and me
Took shots at our two souls
Of my belief in God did end
And of vengence that took control.
Of evil done to this flower
Pulling her apart.
For some strange ideal of teaching
That evil could never have.
The story of fate she told
Of hatred I could not control
The failure I did feel
As my daughters soul was torn.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-07-10 05:20 PM

Some summer it had been
The rays of sun that fell
Gave us all that good feeling
The one, thats before it all.
And of my sweet Meghan
As she did play in the water
These lazy days of summer
That would never again be.
Her words to her mother and me
Took shots at our two souls
Of my belief in God did end
And of vengence that took control.
Of evil done to this flower
Pulling her apart.
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this is very painfilled and sad Michael,
Im very sorry...
take care
jm

I think I could need - this in my life
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
there's a little bit of something me
In everything in you
MB20

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

2 posted 2000-07-10 06:54 PM

a bittersweet piece with much emotion.
thanks for the read.

Jan
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 114

3 posted 2000-07-11 01:32 PM

I can only catch a mere glimpse of your pain and it is overwhelming. My thoughts are with you and I pray you find some relief.
Peace.

ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

4 posted 2000-07-11 01:52 PM

Well done piece on what must have been a wrenching work to complete ... Thanks.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2000-07-11 02:15 PM

Your pain is so evident in this piece...so sorry!

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