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April Resi Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119Alabama |
Your fingers slowly trace my skin I long for your kiss once again You caress my face, is this a sin? Around our bodies, reality spins Out of control, but loving it Every second brings us closer to bliss Sparks ignight with each sweet kiss We've never had something as perfect as this I kiss you and you kiss me Touch and tickle, oh such tease Each moment builds presure and need Waiting for the moment I'll let you join me Skin on skin, moving in sync Emotions take over no time to think Your movements take me to the brink Heart soul and body connect - the final link Lying togehter breaths coming down Floating in clouds far from the ground Soul to soul, forever we're bound A simple sweet smile, no need for a sound Again your fingers trace my skin Can't believe we had this moment again I no longer care if this is a sin I just never want this moment to end. |
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April Resi Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119Alabama |
I hope this one doesn't get me kicked out of here! I could've given it to my friend to post in the adults forum, but I guess I'm just selfish and want the credit for myself! I tried to re-word it so it wouldn't be quite so... umm...risque. I hate watering down my poems tho! Anyway, tell me what ya think. April |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
I sure hope that you don't get kicked out of here for this either, because I think that this is the best I've seen from you so far. If you have any more like this one you can e-mail them to me personally...(deviousLOL) Just playin' Keep the inspirations coming. Yours truly jacman  |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
April, that was beautiful. Don't worry about getting kicked out, because I am sure you won't. We can't let that happen. I loved the poem. Take care and keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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