Open Poetry #8 |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
When I awake I think of you I remember such passionate words that escaped your lips softly whispered in my ear as you whispered ,your words caressed every part of my body such magic in your voice such tingles I felt all along my spine I lay there wanting you even more now that I know you. I want to know you again Learn everything about you. That makes us grow even more connected So we can truly become each others desert. I'll be your chocolate syrup that you crave so much, and you can be my whip cream. I love to delight you and take my sweet time Indulging in every aspect of you. Learning every part of you Knowing where each little sensitive spot is on you. Let me taste you and devour you with such passion that you have never felt before. Such delight that makes you melt. You are what makes a sane woman go insane with such joy never felt before. I curl up in my sheets thinking about you waiting for you once more. I still smell your body that was mine You smell so good on my pillow. I snuggle ever so close All cuddled up and bed and fall gently back asleep dreaming of you. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Truly beautiful thoughts here....I enjoyed this greatly. *Krista Knutson* "Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~ |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
Man, this guy must be one hot number, huh? i'm glad you are able to have such feelings and have them returned. never let go of such rarity. "You are not special. You are not a brilliant and unique snowflake. You are part of the same decaying organic matter as everyone else. We are all part of the same compost heap. We are the all-singing, all-dancing crap of the world." -Tyler Durden "On a long enough timeline, the survival rate for everyone is zero." -Tyler Durden We all got somethin' to atone for. -Ethan Halo |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thank you alwye and ethan, sometimes my heart can not begin to tell what I feel inside. Oh by the way ethan i loved tyler durden gawd did i? |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow ... such passion Rosebud ... you are one lucky woman indeed! Lovely, expressive and romantic sentiments! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thanks Kit, I believe that lovemaking takes practice and lots of it.. and I myself and insatiable shall we say.. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
That was a very powerful poem, it had depth and meaning, I think love making and love although are to totaly different things make very good comparitive metaphors and I always say that - Love is not what matters, its how you express it . I loved the poem . L.of.L. Tom . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Angelwings I agree with you completely .Do men feel the same way? I just think that's what makes us women our feelings run very deep. TO me lovemaking is so emotional. I know I feel like i've went for a nice long swim afterwards but I could always go for another lap. |
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