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Morning Sun |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA 
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Your love has touched my heart like the morning sun alighting on a poppy-strewn hillside. Tenderly bathing the top in amber, then cascading down, a golden fire igniting in its wake. Filling my soul with the joy of its brilliant warmth.  Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP "Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yup, this one likes me...good job, JP! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great description of love "cascading down, a golden fire, igniting in its wake." Man I love it when that happens.......Good show! |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
JP, this is lovely. ~netswan |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JP~ I feel the warmth in this one. Pretty. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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