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Open Poetry #8
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eyesplus2
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since 2000-03-02
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australia
0 posted 2000-07-10 06:29 AM


Hold your breath
Make a wish

Pledge on your heart
Stand on your feet

Give me your hand
Hold it tight

We will make a wish

Each I love you

Will see it come true

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tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
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1 posted 2000-07-10 06:36 AM

Is this a wish or maybe a wedding vow...lovely piece  
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2000-07-10 08:30 AM

I just made a wish......
I wish you to write more!!!!

I thoroughly enjoyed the happiness in this..

Hold life with an open hand....leaving it room to grow....
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