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Jerry Mcguire
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0 posted 2000-07-09 09:39 PM


This morning as I drove away, small tears roll down my eyes,
Lost in the mist of emotion those tears, were tears of joy,
we have met and know there will never really be good byes,
I left my heart and soul with you to cherish, it's not a toy,

I knew right from the moment I looked into your deep greens,
Our love was definitely true and our love was as deep as ocean,
The first kiss was one that I will never forget with such passion and steam,
I was in trance touched by the moment, like someone gave me a love potion,

Swept away like a breeze I felt the love that you have inside and that you showed,
Dreaming of what the future could be like I need my time to be by myself, alone,
Being your knight, giving you all of myself, my love is what I think you deserved and owed,
The foundation of our happiness has now been set, a strong foundation one I can call home.

As the future unfolds for the two of us I can only see so many good things,
Showing our love will only make us stronger, will show the kids what a real family can be,
We will be totally united as a family giving the kids strength being their everything,
So lets show the kids, the world that we have create together, a world that just started as u and me.


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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-07-09 10:29 PM


It starts with just two people..and grows, and grows, and grows...

Elizabeth


I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!



Jerry Mcguire
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2 posted 2000-07-10 07:57 AM


Thanks for the reply Elisabeth...It has grown into something wonderful..and each and everyday I see more growth..It makes me feel like a very lucky man to have such a caring and loving woman in my life.
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