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Open Poetry #8

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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-07-09 09:15 PM

I have often sat and wonderd
At the silliness of my life
The secret pages I have kept
From my those in my life.
Till now at age 34
A small revolution takes place,
Time to be myself once more
And not care where it may be.
My thoughts of anguish and dispair
Of those I think of going, do care
Of nights alone for this peace
Perhaps it really is for me.
Then one heart does come through
A sacred love I thought I new
'Tis not your soul I feel tonight?
Ah yes my lady, the stars were right.

I always wanted to just write straight to web, without stopping the process, or double thinking the words. Fun.
Michael G

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2000-07-09 09:17 PM

An impromptu poem! Cool!

Elizabeth

I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!

xoxoLUVRGURLxoxo
New Member

since 2000-05-01

Posts 9
Corpus Christi, tx

2 posted 2000-07-09 09:22 PM

I liked it..........I too have felt the same way

Lady Web
Member

since 2000-04-12

Posts 96
Houston, Texas

3 posted 2000-07-09 09:25 PM

Its nice to just once in awhile to let it flow

Nice work

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-07-09 10:04 PM

The secret pages I have kept
From my those in my life.
Till now at age 34
A small revolution takes place,
Time to be myself once more
And not care where it may be.
My thoughts of anguish and dispair
Of those I think of going, do care
Of nights alone for this peace
Perhaps it really is for me.
Then one heart does come through
A sacred love I thought I new
'Tis not your soul I feel tonight?
Ah yes my lady, the stars were right.
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well, I like the way your mind works,

very gentle and graceful spontanious ponderings ...
i really like the vunerability of this poem.
very nice
take care
jm

I think I could need - this in my life
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
there's a little bit of something me
In everything in you
MB20

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