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Helix - From #1 Somewhat re-worked
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Helix - From #1 Somewhat re-worked |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration 
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Helix a spiral cone of silence threatens to deafen me all alone, yet feeling crowded oppressed by my very freedom I decline to choose as is my choice blinded by feelings I may never understand I see a whirling pool of confusion roiling beneath my feet it tries to pull me under make my control of nothing whither away into the final emptiness of everything pure |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow Christopher! This is so powerful and full of imagery. I thought I could feel the whirlpool below "me"! Excellent writing! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Christopher~ Wonderfully done, my friend. 'I decline to choose as is my choice' Great line ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Found this way in the back and that just won't do...Back to the top with this...too good to hide... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Nice to see you didn't disappear completely sweetheart..  HUSG |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is a very in depth piece, Christopher, good job. Kathleen |
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