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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
When I tell you I love you, you'll know its for real Words arent enough to make it so. When I tell you I love you, you'll feel the heat Burning clear to your soul. All your life you've looked for me All your life you've felt the pain. Now I'm here and your heart knows my touch. And when I tell you I love you your soul will soar. Because you'll know its real. You'll know its right. You'll know its love. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
If you say so it must be so. Very strong poem Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
very strong emotion Jamie...new and wonderous to me |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Paula, The healing power of a lover's touch . . . there's nothing like it. This is wonderful writing!!  Lone Wolf Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I dont know abt healing...i just wanted him to know |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Awesome, Paula ... Nice flowing style ... My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A.M. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Gotta love it!!!!  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
MA Miller...thanks for reading. Mark...you better |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Just another of your great poems. I enjoy reading them! Sauni |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Lets hope it happens the way you want it too... Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Saunni...thanks for reading. Cuddlez...it already has never say never |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Beautiful words from the heart! |
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