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crucifix kiss Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 14uk |
With your plastic idol in your dirty hands, kneel down and worship your god, respect his power for he is always right. Keep your secrets locked up along with his reasoning do not tell a soul, or they'll take you away, and keep you away from mummy for you are always wrong. Your innocence is all he has and he can rock your world, but all he does is rock your bed do not run. He will always see, and find you just bury your head in his arms and let him be your protection. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
what i read in this poem breaks my heart... and takes my words... so I will just say welcome to Passions CK and take care,please jm< !signature--> What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 07-09-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
YES! This is heartfelt and beautifully written. I feel a bit of darkness in it, and I like that.....life has to have dark, or we'd never notice the light. You write well..... do more, please....... Paint your words upon the eager waiting canvas of my heart.....~Sunny1~ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Your innocence is all he has and he can rock your world, but all he does is rock your bed do not run. He will always see, and find you just bury your head in his arms and let him be your protection. a very dark and intense poem, thanks for sharing and welcome to Passions. I look forward to reading more from you. "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers. |
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crucifix kiss Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 14uk |
thankyou for your kind comments i am truley greatful .i feel i will be content here . thankyou again "your dream can never earn enough" richey james/nickey jones "and as it was with all things, we spoke in rhyme and riddle. Not for fear of detection, for that had happened very long ago, but rather that those wh |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Sad and heart breaking Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Welcome to our world...this is such a dark disturbing piece of work..."just bury your head in his arms and let him be your protection"...such utter surrender of the soul. |
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crucifix kiss Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 14uk |
thanks people , i am thankfull for your kind words "and as it was with all things, we spoke in rhyme and riddle. Not for fear of detection, for that had happened very long ago, but rather that those wh |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Crucifix Kiss ... I too am new to this site today and these people have welcomed me with warmth and genuine replies ... I welcome you as well and wope to hear the lighter side of your story soon ... Keep writing ... |
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