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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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wind blown and into my heart you fall bouncing around the kitchen of my soul you a flash of light you blinded me of my sight with days spent on cloud number nine forever my heart beats your name as you turn like the wind and fall like rain I am tumbled windward, drenched of your weather I am a lost rainbow Angel of Darkness July 2000 Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Yikes! This is good...somehow I've never mastered this style..you do it so well Maree!  |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
sharon is so right .. you do do it very well indeed ... this was the right one to post Maree ... really excellent ..  MP |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
....and all the names througout the world were jealous. For there was only one for which the beautiful lost rainbow did beat. Its rhythmic longing not meant for their ears. But they could earnestly say-- Maree what magnificent colors you do portray! WONDERFUL Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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