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Daddy's Lil' Girl
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Daddy's Lil' Girl |
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xoxoLUVRGURLxoxo New Member
since 2000-05-01
Posts 9Corpus Christi, tx |
Daddy please stop Your hurting me Daddy, why do you do this Why are you so angry What did I do How was I bad Its all my fault I didnt mean to make you mad You tell me I am ugly The sight of me leads to disgust You tell me I am worthless And disowning me is a must Who could blame you Afterall I got what I deserved Isnt that what you tell me Daddy when you beat me senseless And leave my vision blurred Your right I am all that you say And in your eyes much much more To you I am a disgrace A down right filthy whore With each horrible word you say It tears into my soul Makes me contimplate should I even be in this world Maybe thats the answer The answer to cure all your ills If I myself Did just one day kill It may not come to that With your hits one can only wonder If one of these times you beat me I am left six feet under Even through this miserable life you have put me through You are my Daddy and I deeply love you Although you could never feel the same No force in this great world Would ever let you see me As your DADDYS LIL GIRL. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family. This is an interesting but disturbing poem. I hope this is about someone else or your past life and that you've gotten some help. Some of the language is a bit strong so I must warn you if someone complains we'll have to contact you about this. I read your profile and am quite interested in your profession! How many storms a season do you follow? Do you film them? BTW, check your email!  [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 07-08-2000).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It is sad when the person that should be your example for love and caring is only demonstrating anger and disrespect and pain. "No force in this great world would ever let you see me as your daddy's little girl." So sad that you have to speak these words of lost hope and disappointment... Excellent writing...hope you are o.k...James |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
OUCH |
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EmeraldJade New Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 1 |
What a wonderful yet dark poem, I felt the sadness in your soul as I read this piece. I hopr you were writing this not of yourself but if you were.....BRAVO to you for being able to write about it and sshare it with all of us........I gracfully salute you. Emrald  |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Very disturbing but a great example of how people can twist minds... Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Very disturbing but a great example of how people can twist minds... Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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