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Searching for the plane...... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Searching for the plane….. In the shadow of this purple summer's night I sense your touch, feel your breath light, thus comes to me your calming memory, your love I hold so close to me… it was a night, such as this when I held fast to your last kiss stroked your brow, held your hand and felt my heart in pain expand… this space so void, this chasm so black only in memory do I have you back, two crystal goblets of wine I pour, to drink to your memory ever more… and as I taste this wine, bitter sweet, the night's summer warmness is replete and gently into its blackness I will fall as I search for you in the crimson pall for although your body is not near mine I feel you there … through space and time, there, on a plane, a yet unknown mystery where your love I long for, to hold to me… this quest, a life's long pursuit to not be denied to re-find your love, again be entwined and I will search, tho tears make eyes blind there, on that plane that is as transparent as time ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 8 July 2000 Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sunshine..... I know you...this brought tears to my eyes.....I felt the need, as life deals it out, to search for lost love...... This is a very touching piece, and I also feel it's very private in it's emotion..... Thank you for sharing with us.... Paint your words upon the eager waiting canvas of my heart.....~Sunny1~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sunny, a kind response, thank you. Do you know me? Sometimes I would want to know myself, I'll check in with you to see what insight you might give me...{~,^} Again, a warm welcome to Passions. I hope you enjoy your time here...I have, for a year now...and more so, every day... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Lovely verse, Karilea! And it struck home with me today.... enjoyed this very much! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Doreen, now that I know I pulled you in, my day is complete...thank you for letting me know that this touched you... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Karilea, I am exhausted...exhausted in finding words of praise that could be deemed even close to equal to the amazing, beautiful work you do with your poetry.... I stand here in my watchtower, awed... lost for words... regards, sudhir |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Give me wings, that I might catch my love which has taken flight. I love this. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sudhir, not only do I read your lovely words, I am touched by them... Prometheus, your comment alone is something you would build upon, and I look forward to seeing what you might do with those very words... thank you both... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
beautifully penned and so full of desire  Rex |
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