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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri

0 posted 2000-07-08 10:27 AM


   Had I known when
I first saw you
   That these feelings
would run so deep
   I think I would have
run away
   I wasnt looking for
a new love
   In fact love was last
on my list
   I just couldnt stand
to see you cry
   Over a memory that
hurt so badly
   So I offered up my
friendship
   At least thats what
I thought I did
   But love has a way
of slipping inside
   So now there are tears
no more on your pillow
   And tears no more
on mine
   Love found a way
through your pain
   And opened a gate
in the walls I had built
   We found each other
in a sea of others
   Found a dream we
both can share
   So there are tears no
more for lost love
   Tears no more for
sadness
   We are one in this
new joy
   One in this new life
building slowly
   And there are
tears no more
  
  

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-07-08 10:39 AM


Paula~
A lovely and thoughtful render.

'We found each other
in a sea of others'

~*Marge*~

  


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2000-07-08 11:42 AM


Paula.....

          It's a beautiful love story....
  with a happy ending....my favorite read.

      Please write more.....Your words
                please the heart....


Paint your words upon the eager waiting canvas of my heart.....~Sunny1~

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
3 posted 2000-07-08 04:00 PM


Marge...its always nice to have your comments

Sunny...the happy ending is less than a week old...and I'm loving it

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-07-08 05:09 PM


funny how fate sweetly sneaks up on us...
wonderful words of healing hearts and anticipation ...
take care
jm

What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly
~LaoTzeTao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
5 posted 2000-07-08 06:44 PM


Janet...fate...destiny...whatever all I know is its so fine
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