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The Renewal
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The Renewal |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Song birds fill the air with sweet music As we walk hand in hand through the misty meadow Lilac scents the air and sprays of purple and white Blossom against cedars dark green branches The sun slowly rises, turning the lake into glittering gold Clothes are abandoned as we slip into the waters silken embrace And there amidst the worlds awakening We begin a renewal of our own With trembling hands I reach to touch your face Pulling you closer for a tender passion ruled kiss The desire in your eyes echos my own And our bodies soon find natures way Our passion soars as high as the rising sun And our cries fill the meadow as sweetly as birdsong Then passion spent we rise from the waters depths To face the world Knowing we have this to come home to renewed in each other. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
very sweet, lovely images. beautiful poem...aw sigh. "Death makes angels of us all and put wings where we once had shoulders, smooth as raven's wings. Jim Morrison |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
AWWWWWW Brian...thank you for your sweet thoughts |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
now this is my kind of imagery..*smile* very nice...VERY  love the title and its meaning to the poem great work jm |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
just lovely dear-- really took me. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Ahhhh-- wish i could plant myself there. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
JanetMarie...well this is a place close to my heart and a man even closer. The title just seemed to fit. Jamie...among the lilacs and the cedars set your roots deep...there is always room for a friend. Mark...you are always with me love no matter where we are. |
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