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Dom Mart
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since 1999-08-17
Posts 164
Florida

0 posted 2000-07-08 07:14 AM




On the hottest day in summer,
When the asphalt on the street
Begins to feel like bread dough
Puckering up around your feet,

When the oil beneath your arm pit
Or running down your leg
Is so thick that you can spoon it off
And with it fry an egg,

When your underwear clings to your flesh
Like a clammy, spectral hand
And moisture from your body soaks
Clear through the elastic band;

Then you think it might be better
To be dead, given half a choice,
Than to step into a crowded bus
And to hear the driver's voice

In defeated resignation
With a listless tenor say,
"Step into the back please. Sorry
No air-conditioning today."

© Copyright 2000 Dom Mart - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
1 posted 2000-07-08 07:18 AM


OH I hate high humidity and been sweaty and sticky. Just as well we rarely get sun here in Ireland LOL

anyway really enjoyed the poem.

"Death makes angels of us all and put wings where we once had shoulders, smooth as raven's wings. Jim Morrison

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2000-07-08 07:46 AM


Very cool Dom...or should I say very hot...when the trade winds don't blow say 15 to 20 over here in Hawaii the humidity and the heat can be miserable...oh how I love those trade winds...James
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