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Baby I will stay
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Baby I will stay |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Baby I will stay One more time here we go to a place we both know. Silky softness flowing hair hugs and kisses in the air. I Love you baby need you so much lost in the softness of your silky touch. Silken skin silken hair hugs and kisses everywhere. Soft sensual lips I need you everyday. Please care enough for me to never go away. As her lips gently touch mine I hear her softy say "Baby I will stay". Jameslee@July07,2000 |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
wonderful sentiments and isn't it great when they say they will stay. Great title. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) James* So beautiful this is! The image so clear and the soft voice and the hope placed into it were so strong......those words mean so much~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
James~ Enjoyed this sweet piece with my morning coffee. Just right. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ Now I have to hope this is a reflection of what's up with your love life..............is it?  This is so beautiful and turned up the heat this morning, Loved it!  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed it!!!!!!!Keep it up!!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice wriien!!!!!!! |
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Angel`Fox Junior Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 32Ottawa, Ontario Canada |
Simply beautiful!!! keep it up  |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
HURRAY!!!!!!!! At long last......a happy poem from you!!!! LOL I am so glad that things are working for you and ( Lena? ) I hope. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Loved this one.....if only...."sigh"...  Julie :) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank everyone for the lovely response... Yes this is written for lovely Lena.... We have shared lots of hugs and kisses and her lips are soft and sensual.. Parts of this poem have already happened and parts are my hopes and desires. When I wrote "Please care enough for me to never go away" this is my desire but I am not sure if it is Lena's desire yet. We are still at the stage to decide will this relationship be a friendship or something more. I don't mind taking it slow...I am in no rush...but I do anticipate and desire more. And some day soon I sincerely hope she will say..."Baby I will stay".....Thanks again for the wonderful replies...James |
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