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Toerag
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0 posted 2000-07-07 08:08 PM


Just when ya thought it was safe,
And you thought I was gone from here,
I sneak back in to getchya again,
Old LongJohn and Balladeer.

Drinkin' beer for seven days,
Will always make one "weak"
But justa day of rest and I'm at my best
And of course I stay so sweet

I see my friend the sailor,
Is back with poems so quaint,
And Balladeer, (though a tad bit queer)
With words so beautifully paints

I miss dear Suthern yes it's true,
Can hardly find the time,
To write my friends or send some grins,
But I'm doin' pretty fine

Yall behave and remember old Toe,
I miss ya all quite much,
I'll visit soon, (watch for a full moon)
I promise to keep in touch.



© Copyright 2000 Toerag - All Rights Reserved
Sky_Dancer
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1 posted 2000-07-07 08:38 PM


This poem was cute. Since I'm new, it took me a while ( and some researching ) to figure out that these were real people you were talking about. Good Job.
Denise
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2 posted 2000-07-07 08:39 PM


Hey, Toe, I missed you! It's great to see you again! Cute poem!  

Denise

doreen peri
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3 posted 2000-07-07 11:33 PM


You're doing it again!!! Sneaking in and posting a quick one! geez....

well, hey, anyway, it's great to see your toeprints on the boards here... we all miss you! Don't be such a stranger, k?... and don't respond with "I'm no stranger than anybody here!" hehe

*wink* Take care! Come back when you can.

WhtDove
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4 posted 2000-07-07 11:39 PM


Hey Toe buddy!!!  I MISS YOU SOOOOOO MUCH
around here!


Glad to see you pop in on us and let us know you're still among the living!

Keepin' Ol' LJA and Balladeer in check  

Miss Behavin'
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5 posted 2000-07-08 12:30 PM


Did somebody see Toerag hobblin' through here?


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6 posted 2000-07-08 03:42 AM


Oh, Toe~
You just need to come here more often.
We miss the heck out of you.
Hoping all is well ....

Full moon is July 15/16 .... so don't make us wait that long !

Love ya'
~*Marge*~





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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suthern
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7 posted 2000-07-08 09:23 AM


Glad to hear you're staying sweet
This suthern gal is incomplete
Without your smooches and your smiles...
Sure do wish you'd stay a while!
Take care of you and come back soon
(I'll be all prepared to swoon *G*)
It sure is good to see you 'round
And know that you are safe and sound!
Keep in touch as best you can...
I miss you so much, dearest man.

Sunshine
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8 posted 2000-07-08 09:29 AM


Toe, that WAS you leaving footprints 'round my door!

Good to see you, So To[e] Speak...

hop into the melee, m'friend...we can't wait for the next fool, er, full moon...

Poet deVine
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9 posted 2000-07-08 09:48 AM


It's always a treat to see your name here....the place could use a couple more poems from the Toeman!      
Toerag
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Ala bam a
10 posted 2000-07-09 10:41 AM


Hi ya gang! Hope ya all are just peachy! I see someone has one of my old class photos still....My hair's much longer now than in that photo, and my rag's quite smaller since I've lost some weight. Hope to be able to visit more often after another two weeks of hell, so yall hang around fer-a-bit ya hear?...Take care...and know me and God both love ya....(just kinda in different ways yanno)......
bad little dog
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city pound
11 posted 2000-07-09 10:46 AM


I always watch for full moons
especially on the beach


Ruff Bow Wow
Grrrrrrrrrrr

RainbowGirl
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12 posted 2000-07-09 03:31 PM


Hiya darling..

Good to see you   Now where's my flipping mail????????...LOL

Take care of you

HUSG

LngJhnAg
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13 posted 2000-07-09 05:39 PM


Didja all read that??  Toerag says he loves me (but in an unGodly wway).  All of a sudden, I don't feel safe anymore.

Hi ya, you rascally scalawag - its good to see you posting again - albeit brief (and quite poorly, I might add) - lol.  Take care of you, Toe.

Mike

suthern
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14 posted 2000-07-10 07:03 AM


Two more weeks seems like forever
To miss your smiles and your clever
Banter with Long John and Balladeer...
I can't wait till you're back here!
I'll count the days, so don't be late
(Though heaven knows, you're worth the wait!)
Whatever hell you're going through
It's hell for me, this missing you!

Hurry back, sweets... SMOOCH!

Nan
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15 posted 2000-07-10 10:26 AM


YO Toe.... You bein' haved????

Corinne
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16 posted 2000-07-10 10:41 AM


Toe, is that really you?  Had to do a double take to be sure!

Corinne

Justbleu
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17 posted 2000-07-15 08:03 AM


Hey Toe...this is one of your sweeter ones!!    To the 'deer one I mean!! Put a smile on my face!!  
Bridgette


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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