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An apple a day
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An apple a day |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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An apple a day Time rings out for you and me Outside the garden and the tree. Served a plate of expedite From an apple and a bite Now we blunder in a daze, Full of roads that form a maze. Spading sand against the tide, Time and tide that we abide. In this circle of extreme Like a fantasy or dream, Time and term and term again Filled with longing and Amen. Change continues into strange Ever making the exchange Till the sun will pass away Serving apples on a tray And we eat one every day Just to pass the term away. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 07-07-2000).] |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
ahh tis a lovely poem dear sir!  ~Heather |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now we blunder in a daze, Full of roads just like a maze. Spading sand against the tide, Time and tide that we abide Great flow. Really liked this part. Thanks for sharing. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
X Angel, Thanks for the lovely. Mark, Thanks for the nice comment. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is good, Sy! And it makes me hungry!  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Returning to the apple tree - I am tempted once again - to take a bite of life - and hold it deep within. Your thoughts are so provoking of my own. Thank you, dear poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and if the bite were then not taken would we ever feel forsaken... so, so good, dear Sy! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Poet deVine, Have an apple. *L* Marge, Today we have apple pie. *L* Sunshine, Could you give up apple pie? *L* |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is great seymour...must have missed it...I voted here...now I am off to make "apple pie"... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great poem Seymour. I love the title and the tie in to the body of the poem. Keep writing time after term after term. Well done! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, Thanks for the vote and I'll have a piece of that apple pie. Ethome, Enjoyed your comment. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Ahhh, Sy - you are the deep one - you write so well, and in such great metaphors. I really enjoy this poem. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LngJhnAg, And you my friend are a romantic. |
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