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redwriter1
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Franklin, TN

0 posted 2000-07-06 10:40 PM


first may i say.. this dancing monkey is going to drive me to get a shot gun!!!.. My cursor blinking like this is driving me insane!!!!!!!!
ok
(calm down kay-lynn)

Just a little something I wanted to share. I feel better now.. (grin)

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

He came on like a sweet and gentle breeze
breathing life into the curtains
of the windows I kept closed
but
he knows..............

Suddenly the road was not so long
don't know where we're goin
or how long we'll be gone
but
he knows...............

He knows that I know
but I'm so afraid
I know that he knows
that we're in it
don't know where to go...


but
he knows..............


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-07-06 10:48 PM


Hey there, Red~
I know I like this one very much.
Good seeing your smiling self here.
~*Marge*~



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Lone Wolf
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2 posted 2000-07-06 10:54 PM


Redwriter1,

Great poem!!!  Now, WE all know!!  hehe...  

LW


Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.
--William Wordsworth

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3 posted 2000-07-06 11:19 PM


"breathing life into the curtains of the windows I keep closed.." what a wonderful line! Nice to see ya, Red  
redwriter1
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4 posted 2000-07-06 11:22 PM


Thank you Mr 5,319... (grin)

Nice to see you to.  

Kay-lynn
**A dream is a wish your heart makes :)


Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-07-06 11:27 PM


Oh yeah !
Thanks Marge and Lone Wolf too !
Nice to see y'all too !
Jeezzzzzzzzz !

Way to go Balladeer !
You buy her songs !
~*Marge*~


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6 posted 2000-07-06 11:29 PM


Kay-Lynn,

What are you smoking?
I don't see a monkey  LOL

He came on like a sweet and gentle breeze
breathing life into the curtains
of the windows I kept closed
but
he knows..............

Suddenly the road was not so long
don't know where we're goin
or how long we'll be gone
but
he knows...............

He knows that I know
but I'm so afraid
I know that he knows
that we're in it
don't know where to go...


but
he knows..............


Absolute perfection m'friend



redwriter1
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Franklin, TN
7 posted 2000-07-06 11:45 PM


Lone and Marge..

such high praise.. don't know what to say.


Can't wait to read more of your poems.!
(smile)

Kay-lynn
**A dream is a wish your heart makes :)


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