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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN 
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first may i say.. this dancing monkey is going to drive me to get a shot gun!!!.. My cursor blinking like this is driving me insane!!!!!!!! ok (calm down kay-lynn) Just a little something I wanted to share. I feel better now.. (grin) >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> He came on like a sweet and gentle breeze breathing life into the curtains of the windows I kept closed but he knows.............. Suddenly the road was not so long don't know where we're goin or how long we'll be gone but he knows............... He knows that I know but I'm so afraid I know that he knows that we're in it don't know where to go... but he knows.............. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hey there, Red~ I know I like this one very much.  Good seeing your smiling self here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Redwriter1, Great poem!!! Now, WE all know!! hehe... LW Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
"breathing life into the curtains of the windows I keep closed.." what a wonderful line! Nice to see ya, Red |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
Thank you Mr 5,319... (grin) Nice to see you to. Kay-lynn **A dream is a wish your heart makes :) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh yeah ! Thanks Marge and Lone Wolf too !  Nice to see y'all too ! Jeezzzzzzzzz !  Way to go Balladeer ! You buy her songs ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Kay-Lynn, What are you smoking?  I don't see a monkey LOL He came on like a sweet and gentle breeze breathing life into the curtains of the windows I kept closed but he knows.............. Suddenly the road was not so long don't know where we're goin or how long we'll be gone but he knows............... He knows that I know but I'm so afraid I know that he knows that we're in it don't know where to go... but he knows.............. Absolute perfection m'friend  |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
Lone and Marge.. such high praise.. don't know what to say. Can't wait to read more of your poems.! (smile) Kay-lynn **A dream is a wish your heart makes :) |
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