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Sorrow Song Senryu
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Sorrow Song Senryu |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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~SORROW SONG SENRYU~ 5-7-5 Sorrow in my heart intensely flows from my eyes blurring tomorrow *By Melissa Honeybee* The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) These are such little gems from you...I am much to wordy to ever evoke such feeling from so little, I envy this gift you have but am thankful that you share  |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Focus on the past allows the flow of sorrow flooding of today very nice MH! Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Such deep sorrow evoked from such few words my friend...what a talent you have. *Krista Knutson* "We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you for the kind replies Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
another winner...like the last line muchly...the few simple words show how apprehensive and depressed she is about the future NICE!Sorrow Song Senyru Past inhibitions Imprisons bashful mind deep Only sad song heard |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you kaile, and your senryu was well written, thanks for sharing Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Melissa short but not so sweet, another well crafted piece. I hope every thing is well. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Another gem, Melissa. Keep them coming! Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you Brian and Elizabeth I enjoy writing haikus and senryus, and I try to make them personal if I can Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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