Open Poetry #8 |
YOU HAVE co-written by:MysticalNights |
Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Ok, I want to thank MysticalNights (Tuffy) for doing this with me. It's been about a week in the works but it's finally done! LOL He says he's new at this and he doesn't think he is very good...I think he's very good and doesn't realize his own talent. But I certainly do...much love to you my dear. < !signature-->"You Have" you have made me smile when i didn't feel like doing so you have made me realize my heart is what you truly know you have moved my soul to dance you have made me want to take another chance you have fueled passions i thought had long passed you have made me even feel this could last you have opened my eyes to things that were once blind you have convinced this sorrowful heart to leave it’s past behind you have filled me with emotions words simply cannot express you have produced within me feelings getting harder to repress you have brought this raging storm such serenity you have made by your side a place I wish to be you have done so much to prove your love is the truest kind you have made my heart realize it was you it was trying to find you have filled my days with laughter and my nights with passion you have made me finally believe our love is ever lasting By:MysticalNights(Tuff) & Holly July 2000 I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne [This message has been edited by Holly (edited 07-07-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Loved the collaboration! How about another? |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
This was very beautiful. I really felt like both of you were talking to one another. Very well done Holly and Tuffy. As far as MysticalNights(Tuffy) not being very good? He's nuts! LOL I think his work is great! It's a beautiful poem you two. kat |
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Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
hey Holly... and Tuffy!! Glad to see you two writing together! I loved reading this poem, it made me think. Which sometimes is a good thing, and at other times, oh well LOL Keep up the good work you too! love, Cyndey "All that we see or seem, Is but a dream within a dream" Edgar Allan Poe |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Holly & Tuffy* What a beautiful display of love and passion I agree.....encore please |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
Thank you all for your kind words. It was great being able to create with Holly on this. She is the one who got me interested in poetry a few short months ago. So it was an honor when she asked me to try this with her. Another...hhmmmm That will be up to my partner. If she is willing, I would love too. Thank you all again.. MysticalNights (Tuffy) A Dream is a Wish the Heart Makes... |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Thank you to everyone that replied with such sweet words. As far as feeling like we were speaking to each other..we are very close friends, so in a sense, I guess we are. He's a wonderful partner to write with...so my dear friend, when ever you are ready and willing...just let me know!! love & all, -Holly I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
You have-- given me words to enjoy.. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
very nice poem!!!!!!!!!!i liked it very much!!!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
What can I say that hasn't been already said?? Just great you two. . . I agree. . .another!! ------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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