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Holly
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0 posted 2000-07-06 06:53 PM


Ok, I want to thank MysticalNights (Tuffy) for doing this with me. It's been about a week in the works but it's finally done! LOL He says he's new at this and he doesn't think he is very good...I think he's very good and doesn't realize his own talent.   But I certainly do...much love to you my dear.

"You Have"


you have made me smile when i didn't feel like doing so  
you have made me realize my heart is what you truly know  
you have moved my soul to dance  
you have made me want to take another chance  
you have fueled passions i thought had long passed  
you have made me even feel this could last  

you have opened my eyes to things that were once blind
you have convinced this sorrowful heart to leave it’s past behind
you have filled me with emotions words simply cannot express
you have produced within me feelings getting harder to repress
you have brought this raging storm such serenity
you have made by your side a place I wish to be

you have done so much to prove your love is the truest kind
you have made my heart realize it was you it was trying to find
you have filled my days with laughter and my nights with passion
you have made me finally believe our love is ever lasting

By:MysticalNights(Tuff) & Holly
July 2000

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I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of.  
  Michel de Montaigne



[This message has been edited by Holly (edited 07-07-2000).]

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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-07-06 08:14 PM


Loved the collaboration! How about another?
kat
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2 posted 2000-07-06 10:54 PM


This was very beautiful. I really felt like both of you were talking to one another. Very well done Holly and Tuffy.

As far as MysticalNights(Tuffy) not being very good? He's nuts! LOL
I think his work is great!

It's a beautiful poem you two.  

kat

Cyndey
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since 2000-05-18
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3 posted 2000-07-06 11:17 PM


hey Holly... and Tuffy!!  
Glad to see you two writing together! I loved reading this poem, it made me think. Which sometimes is a good thing, and at other times, oh well LOL   Keep up the good work you too!
love,
Cyndey


"All that we see or seem, Is but a dream within a dream"
Edgar Allan Poe

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
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4 posted 2000-07-06 11:18 PM



Holly & Tuffy*
What a beautiful display of love and passion
I agree.....encore please  

MysticalNights
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since 2000-05-17
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5 posted 2000-07-07 03:45 AM


Thank you all for your kind words.  It was great being able to create with Holly on this.  She is the one who got me interested in poetry a few short months ago. So it was an honor when she asked me to try this with her.  Another...hhmmmm  That will be up to my partner.  If she is willing, I would love too.  Thank you all again..

MysticalNights (Tuffy)


A Dream is a Wish the Heart Makes...

Holly
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6 posted 2000-07-07 10:29 AM


Thank you to everyone that replied with such sweet words. As far as feeling like we were speaking to each other..we are very close friends, so in a sense, I guess we are.   He's a wonderful partner to write with...so my dear friend, when ever you are ready and willing...just let me know!!  
love & all,
-Holly


I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of.
Michel de Montaigne


Jamie
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7 posted 2000-07-07 11:00 AM


You have-- given me words to enjoy..


Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


vandana
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8 posted 2000-07-07 11:13 AM


very nice poem!!!!!!!!!!i liked it very much!!!!!
Sven
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9 posted 2000-07-08 05:14 PM


What can I say that hasn't been already said??

Just great you two. . . I agree. . .another!!

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



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