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Poetias Junior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 26 |
He is gone. Him who I have loved for what seems an eternity. He is drastically different from the one man I had looked to for everything. For love. For understanding. For friendship. Why is it then, that now even when I am trying the most I'm finding it so hard to love I knew the struggle that was to come I knew the sun would mix with clouds in the tumultuous cycle of love Daylight is fading though, and the morning has disappeared beneath a grim and stormy night. When love calls, do not heed him in haste. Question him and peer beneath the shine to see what sort of rot you'll find. Find the ugly underneath, and love it too. For that is what the test will be. If you can; build your dreams together. But if you see that the grim overshadows the beauty you hold dear Rewrite the ending to the love story you've made... The End. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Poetias~ Welcome to the Passionate Poet family. You have some lovely thoughts in your poem. 'Rewrite the ending to the love story you've made...' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Poetias~ Very, very good, my friend! This is a very powerful and passionate piece! Let mee, too, welcome you to our "little" family here at Passions. Hope to read more from you soon!  ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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