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michelax Junior Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 16Malta |
Condemned To Solitude Me and my thoughts, my darkness and rain, yes those dull days came to haunt me again, dreams of good faith, flushed down by my side hopes for good times cry aloud while I stride. Someone have mercy on my ill fated self. Someone please read me from my old dust filled shelf. Why was it me and why's it still there, the haunting of solitude, the darkness is here. I feel I am loosing my talent to love, my shiver's keep aching, my dreams far above. But when I wake up, and my clouds disappear, the dull shadows haunt me, they're felt, they appear. So cruel this solitude, so lonely this night, I'm losing my vigour, to sit up and fight. Please find me somebody with whom I can share, before I fall down in the dungeons of despair. © June 1996 Michelax |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Welcome to passions Michel.. < !signature-->this is a well written emotional poem... sad and dark in its beauty and expressions. I took a quick look at your webpage... I really liked Night Thoughts and Confusion.. I will go back and visit more as time allows. nice to meet you, I look forward to more of your work. take care jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 07-05-2000).] |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
welcome to passions, very sad poem, was glad to see the copywrite in 96, hope 2000 finds you smiling |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A sad piece to start with, but a very well written one, Michel... WELCOME TO PASSIONS Hope that you enjoy your stay here. regards, sudhir Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Welcome to Passions!! A powerfully sad piece to enter with, written with emotion so deep you could easily drown in it. My hope is that you have found the healing touch of poetry as well have you have found your gift to weave these words.Thank you so much for sharing this piece~ |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
Never have I read a poem that i have been so in tune with. I cant even begin to describe the feelings and emotion you brought to me while reading your poem. I admire you greatly for the talent and the joy that you brought to me Blessed Be, Beth |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Welcome to Passions, nicely writ my friend. "Someone please read me from my old dust filled shelf" Nicely done, indeed.  Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP "Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
So cruel this solitude, so lonely this night, I'm losing my vigour, to sit up and fight. Please find me somebody with whom I can share, before I fall down in the dungeons of despair. MIchael I can certainly relate to this one. Welcome to Passions, a great entrance. I look forward to more from you. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sweet words of sadness filling the air. Hope things have gotten better in the past four years. Welcome to Passions and a great start with this wonderful poem.  |
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