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Rindercella
Member
since 1999-11-12
Posts 64
La La Land

0 posted 2000-07-05 04:11 PM


A simple maiden
Don't need much.
Would settle for
Your precious touch.

Just in time
You came to me.
Set my soul
Ever free.

Love now hold me
In the palm of your hand.
I will declare
Love is grand.


*If the shoe fits ... the castle is yours*



© Copyright 2000 Rindercella - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-07-05 04:15 PM


Sometimes simple is what we need most.  I absolutely loved this one.  Welcome to "Passions"

[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 07-05-2000).]

myslinky
Junior Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 27

2 posted 2000-07-05 04:18 PM


THIS POEM GIVES ME A WARM FEELING.
ITS VERY CUTE. I LUVED IT!  

Words like violence
Break the silence
M.L. Gore

TerryW
Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA
3 posted 2000-07-05 04:34 PM


Rindercella~
     Very good!  I like this a lot.  Very sweet sentiments!  Thank you for sharing, and welcome to Passions!



~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
4 posted 2000-07-05 06:06 PM


Love is so lovely, yes!  Welcome to Passions.
Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
5 posted 2000-07-08 10:49 AM


welcome to Passions...and what a way to enter in...very sweet
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