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Dust In The Rain
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Dust In The Rain |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
In my souls shattered dreams I still see your face, feel your touch haunting me, taunting me with your absence. Your promise of love everlasting died in the morning rain, washed away like dust from summers sun scorched trees. Leaving me lost, leaving me asking questions no one can answer... alone in the dark night shadows. Drifting on my sea of denial...but still knowing this...love freely given can never be wrong and love shared, never denied. So I will go on, and I know someday, there will come one true love and this will all be Like dust in the rain |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Your promise of love everlasting died in the morning rain, washed away like dust from summers sun scorched trees. Drifting on my sea of denial...but still knowing this...love freely given can never be wrong and love shared, never denied. So I will go on, and I know someday, there will come one true love and this will all be Like dust in the rain Wow love the last line, a great image. Paula, an excellent poem, some tender emotions in this piece. I am sure that you will find a love made of solid rock and not dust. take care thanks for sharing. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Brian thank you....hope is all we have to get past some hurts. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I loved the title. I agree with brian, excellent! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wipe off the dust dear one; Here I am |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Paula I to loved the title thats what drew me to this  Wonderful read Paula Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
EagleOne...thank you sometimes the titles are easier than the poem Tracie...its always good when a few words can say it all Mark...dearheart please know these hurts have flown before your trust. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
once more thru please |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
This was great. Excellent piece. kitkat |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Thank you I'm glad you liked it. |
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