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Electric Souls |
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Leigh Anne Junior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 48Scottsboro, AL USA |
This is unfinished currently.... Electric Soul Papers fall from my desk, My desk teeters on the edge of the cosmos, and I commit each word to fire. I Burn! For you I burn! All night I write in suns across the page I fuel the busy, the body, that from your touch, is now the body electric, with midnight oil. I write with neon enthusiasm across the air. Leigh Anne~~~ To be a mother is to accept your heart will forever walk outside your own body!" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ooh I like this.... I love sensual, sultry poetry.. this one is great...sparks.. let me know when you finsh it... like the imagery of the cosmos and fire scorch that keyboard!!  great writing jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Leigh Anne Junior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 48Scottsboro, AL USA |
Thank you my dear! Your praise is much appreciated although this is one of my least favorite poems thus far....  Leigh Anne~~~ To be a mother is to accept your heart will forever walk outside your own body!" |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Leigh, look forward to the rest of this poem. Great so far. really enjoyed it. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent. . . I love the idea of falling from that point into a fire. . . Can't wait to see it finished. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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LittleCookie Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 55asheville,NC,UnitedStates |
I just love how this is wrote! You set the words on fire...Great! ~~LittleCookie~~ :*)Agile in love,while rooted in soul |
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