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LittleCookie
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 55
asheville,NC,UnitedStates

0 posted 2000-06-30 12:24 PM

My soul,
His soul,
My heart,
His heart,

I act tough,
he knows i'm not,
looks into me,
I forgot,

forgot to act tough,
and I let him near,
when i'm near him,
there is no fear,

fear to open myself completely,
longing for his touch,
allowing him to love me deeply,

deeply he touches me inside,
where is my cover,
there is no place to hide,

to hide my feelings,
now I can't do this,
now he's on one knee,
I get my wish.

:*)Agile in love,while rooted in soul

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

1 posted 2000-06-30 02:25 PM

sounds like awonderful relationship. I wish you well with your marriage.

"monuments put from pen to paper turns me into a gutless wonder" Manic street preachers

LittleCookie
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 55
asheville,NC,UnitedStates

2 posted 2000-07-04 01:48 AM

This wasn't about something real,just fantasy!I'm flattered though!
~~Little Cookie~~

:*)Agile in love,while rooted in soul

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

3 posted 2000-07-04 01:50 AM

Fantasy is as good as the best of dreams. Hope it becomes reality for you someday.
Wonderful read.

LittleCookie
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 55
asheville,NC,UnitedStates

4 posted 2000-07-04 02:03 AM

Thank you Mark! With encouragement like this, who could fail? ~~Little Cookie~~

:*)Agile in love,while rooted in soul

eyesplus2
Member

since 2000-03-02

Posts 163
australia

5 posted 2000-07-04 02:20 AM

Always believe in the magic of Love

For with it you fly above what is

and reach for the stars.

LittleCookie
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 55
asheville,NC,UnitedStates

6 posted 2000-07-04 02:49 AM

So right you are!!Thank you!

:*)Agile in love,while rooted in soul

Daniel_vv
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 61

7 posted 2000-07-04 02:53 AM

Beautiful poem. Well done!

Daniel_vv
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 61

8 posted 2000-07-04 02:54 AM

Beautiful poem. Well done!

Leigh Anne
Junior Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 48
Scottsboro, AL USA

9 posted 2000-07-04 03:29 AM

Now run quick,
Not a moment to spare,
For marriage is reason
To pull out your hair!

LOL........sorry! Nice poem, but I had to add just a tad of sarcasm from a very married perspective!

Leigh Anne~~~
To be a mother is to accept your heart will forever walk outside your own body!"

JulieAnn
Senior Member

since 2000-06-12

Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

10 posted 2000-07-04 03:44 AM

I agree with L.A. it can you drive you crazy or just out the door LOL ,,,,but don't let me discourage you....it is a good poem and a nice fantasy....

Julie :)

LittleCookie
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 55
asheville,NC,UnitedStates

11 posted 2000-07-04 11:33 PM

Leigh--I apprieciate your humor, don't ever change--keeps things light!
Julie--Don't worry!I'll keep myself one step
ahead!hehe
Thanks

~~LittleCookie~~

:*)Agile in love,while rooted in soul

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