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Daniel_vv Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 61 |
Smulder Was it rape, my angel did him tie you up with lies did he look deep within you were his words a distguise My dear, smuldering flame re-new the trust you burnt tell me to be rescued from the pain you exert I bruise my tears with the punch you said you slept with the devil using my heart as the bed Why, oh why my baby, tell me for my lifes sake Because I don't what to live (anymore) drowning in your dirty lake Choke, cry, and try to reason nothing will set you free for all you'll find is the emptiness you left in me |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Daniel...I can feel the pain ozzing from this piece. Very well done.  I know this is not your first piece but it is the first I have had the opportunity to read. Welcome to Passions and please excuse my tardiness. :{When you are old and grey and full of sleep, And nodding by the fire, take down this book, And slowly read, and dream of the soft look Your eyes had once, and of their shodows deep; How many loved your moments of glad grace, And loved your beauty with love false or true, But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you, And loved the sorrows of your changing face... William Butler Yeats |
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Rupert Evans II Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 13 |
Dan this is a great poem. Thanks a lot for sharing with us the public |
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