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Love Me Today
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Love Me Today |
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Rupert Evans II Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 13 |
Love Me Today Love me today As the wings of yesterday grazing our lips flutter into the past Captivating the dreams we once held so close Transforming them into shadows that fill our nights with constant mocking Love me today While the pleasures of the present engulf us Seizing our souls from within Materializing them into a tangible, caressable form Love me today As the mysteries of tomorrow confound you and I Evaporating the ideas and fantasies we have incorporated into ourselves Naively believing the future holds something special for us Love me today Two specks of sand making their final decent through the hourglass of time Rubbing their textured bodies against each other Reflecting on the way things used to be Love me today Before the seal between our lips collapses Awakening me and I am forced to say no Just love me, while you still have the change |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Love me today As the mysteries of tomorrow confound you and I Evaporating the ideas and fantasies we have incorporated into ourselves Naively believing the future holds something special for us Love me today Two specks of sand making their final decent through the hourglass of time Rubbing their textured bodies against each other Reflecting on the way things used to be Great lines you got there RUP, you don't mind if I call you RUP do ya? LOL Welcome to our evergrowing corner of the web I think you'll enjoy your stay  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Love me today Two specks of sand making their final decent through the hourglass of time Rubbing their textured bodies against each other Reflecting on the way things used to be Love me today Before the seal between our lips collapses Awakening me and I am forced to say no Just love me, while you still have the change ------------ Okie dokie ...ya talked me into it baby... where do I sign up  WOW this is stunning... wonderful writing... superb imagery with a building sensuality so much impact of emotion as well very cool poem Welcome to Passions sir... so very nice to meet you take care jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Leigh Anne Junior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 48Scottsboro, AL USA |
As you well know I have always admired and embraced your poetry! I am so glad you finally got up the courage to post, and see that people other than myself admire your talent! Please keep up the soulful writing. < !signature-->Leigh Anne~ proud Mother to Dakota. To be a mother is to accept your heart will forever walk outside your own body!" [This message has been edited by Leigh Anne (edited 07-04-2000).] |
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Leigh Anne Junior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 48Scottsboro, AL USA |
Sorry, but had to come back to add this to my library! Leigh Anne~~~ To be a mother is to accept your heart will forever walk outside your own body!" |
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Rupert Evans II Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 13 |
I just wanted to say thanks for the kind words that were expressed concerning my poem. It is those words that allow people to want to write more. Thanks again for all the love. Rupert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rupert~ Welcome to the family of Passionate poets and friends. A tender render from your heart. You will enjoy your stay among us. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed reading this Rupert...rich words and lovely flow of thoughts...James |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Rupert~ Stunning writing, my friend! Absolutely lovely. Welcome to our little family. We are so glad to have you here with us! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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