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Using your titles in my poem( my stab at it)
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Using your titles in my poem( my stab at it) |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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'Surviving Yet Not Living' oh 'What to do now?' Ride out the 'Passions storm' even though 'I know that now' '.....and she whispered......' to you 'Excuse me', All that matters' is that 'You just went to have some fun' not thinking ' If tomorrow doesn't come' but what I want is for you to see the '^Fireflies of Enchantment^' circling around me dear 'Fustrated Poet' in the 'Midnight Sunshine' facing the 'Chaos' in this '4th of July challenge' like a 'Phantom' in my soul 'I gave it all' and feel the 'Ache of Again' this 'Tribute to all of you- Voices' on a 'Whimiscal Windy Wednesday' floating like 'A Feather', 'Look', 'The Carpenter and the Marionette' dance to this 'Moonight Sonata in Haiku' 'Timepeace' ignored because 'Tuesday is tired of dying' but thinks'Something Wonderful Will Happen' when 'What once was lost' is found again in the 'Radiance' of 'Mother Earth- Father Sky'. -SEA- * well at least I tried*  Sorry I didn't get all in there.< !signature--> Live,Love,Laugh ~SueB[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 07-03-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Bravo Sea Bravo~ Your "stab",...is marvelous,...way cool. hehe. *Peace*. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
When you stab you stab deep. Good job Sue. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
That's so cool, bow to your creativity! Corinne |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
too cool too cool, love these, i wish i was that creative |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I ditto all and acknowledge the CREATIVITY you possess... regards, sudhir. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Nana nana boo boo!!! My title was first  LOLsorry , i just had to get that out of my system  Dang , this is so creative! I'd never be able to gather enough patience to this LOL |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
~SEA this is very cool and I agree quite creative!! Enjoyed it a lot!!!! Cool!!! Hey where's one of my titles?? LOL!! Just kidding with ya!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
SpitFire~ thank you, I'm taking my bow now  Mark~ deep is good, thanks! Corinne~coming from one so creative, I humbly thank you Corazon~ You are.....thank you Sudhir lyer~ thank you sweet man Jeffery~ yes, you were first! And I bet you could blow us all away with one like this. Thanks Justbleu~ I'm sorry, honest I did the best I could, it was just what was on the screen this morning, all in order. I would love to one with all in it, that would be a heck of a poem eh? Thanks -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very cool---great job sea-gator... thanks for including me and my ache Jeffery hon...GET A GRIP LOL  later jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
This is great SEA! Must have been fun to write! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Janet~ I have to thank you for your 'Ache' as it fit so well in this! Insect~ it was fun! I was looking at the screen, reading them and putting them together and I grabbed a pen and started writting. I'm glad you liked this, thank you. -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Well, Ms. SEA~ I just happen to think you did a bodacious job ! And Jeffrey - 'Nana nana boo boo!!!' I had TWO in it ! Nana nana boo boo!!! What fun ! Great job, gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
This was amazing! You did a superb job with this SEA! Loved it! kat |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sea you've done a wonderful job here! Much credit for putting it all together like you have! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sea....great job....and thanks for putting me one up on Jeffrey....HAHAHA I have two too....love it |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge, Kat and WhtDove~ thank you for the cool replies, this was fun for me, I didn't think I could do it! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Paula~ thanks! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
SEA, after reading this creative piece, I decided to write my own. A great job you did here Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I just wanted to thank all for the wonderful titles, I know I should have sooner~ sorry. SO here go the credits!(not in order) Jeffery Carter Paula Finn Corinne Corazon Marge Leteddybear Kathrine Redwriter 1 Eyesplus2 Poet DeVine Rodney Belcher Michael G Angelswing Ellie LeJeune Denise Nona Janet Marie Doreen Peri Seymour Prometheus ESP (lil' Lizzie) Monique Sudhir lyer Elizabeth Santos Dark Angel Thanks to all of you, and to those I didn't get in this poem, I will do what I can next time! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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