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What Once was Lost
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What Once was Lost |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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My friend challenged me to use " What Once was Lost" in a poem... so here it is.  What Once was Lost Within the moonlight of my mind buried deep inside you will find Memories of what once was lost Stubborn, we both wore the cost Of hearts fading and losing glow The dying colours of our rainbow Days of wondering who was wrong? Of a love we thought was strong And as beautiful as our love was That path we weren't meant to cross Though the hands of time have wound Because of what once was lost A new friendship we have found Angel of Darkness July 2000 Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
beautiful... sometimes being friends is better than nothing at all. if you don't like the message, don't kill the messenger. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ Love to see your response to your friend's request ... lucky us ! Like that 'rhyme thang' ! Love ya', gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
DA~ this is incredible!! I really like this a lot! Great poem. -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Searching for one thing and finding another. Nice outcome. jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Maree..this bears the stamp of beauty...superb my dear. K |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
OMG...I am experiencing those same emotions right now... Love one another-let God do the worrying, Rodney |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Angel, this one touches the deepest chamber of the heart. I've read this one a few times and may I add let's keep it posted up front for more friends to enjoy. Coco PS: did I say I happen to like this one alot [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 07-03-2000).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A challenge answered in fine style. This one has touched me deeply, it may well be the best of your work I have seen. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Beautiful writings little one..a challenge well met..well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Dark Angel ... this flows so beautifully, you met your challenge well indeed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
Your poem is amazing!! |
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