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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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All that Matters In the waning of the day when shadows elongate tendrils descend through liquid amber glow tree limbs mushroom in cellular recall memories fragment etched into matter reflecting a pool of you. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely, Corinne!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautifully composed, so much feeling in so few lines. |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
Beautiful Corinne! I love short poems that say so much! ~Kelly ~Kellsue Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
less IS more...  excellent etchings C, perfect... take care jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ You caress tender thoughts and they blossom with beauty. Beautiful, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thankyou, Lizzie, Ethome, Kellsue, Janet Marie and Marge, for your kind words! Corinne |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! This is fabulous, Corinne! So much said with so few words! I love it! Denise |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Denise. Corinne |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
tendrils descend through liquid amber glow ... ... etched into matter reflecting a pool of you -------- Corinne, few words, lovely words, brilliant piece... I can keep on with this on and on, thats how much I enjoyed this... regards, Sudhir |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful Corrine, really lovely expressions in so few words, that tie so nicely back into your poem's title. Just wonderful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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