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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2000-07-02 03:37 PM


As the clouds stroll across the sky,
I look beyond the blue,
For dreams and wishes to come true,

Every second I see,
You  and me,
Floating on a dream of eternity,

Visions of my imaginations,
Run wild and free,
Forever you and me,

I see your poems,
The words you express,
My heart filled with completeness,

Images of our lovers kiss,
Aching arms wanting to hold,
Untold stories to be told,

As the sun slowly sets,
The sky lights up with diamonds,
I am here, alone and crying,

Wanting you evermore,
A tear falls to the ground,
Up into the sky is found,

A twinkle, a star,
Hope is there before me,
I  see you, feel  you, near me,

Wherever you are...





[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 07-03-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
mariee66
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Recess, OfYourMind
1 posted 2000-07-02 03:41 PM


I saw and felt this one...great longing, with a touch of hope.  Great work RH  
Marie~

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2000-07-02 03:47 PM


excellent...
longing, desire,ache,kisses under stars, hope...
all the good stuff
great work RH
take care JM

ps would you please E-mail me,
wanted to ask you something...
i dont have your addy, mines up there
when you have time...
thanks, jm

What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly
~LaoTzeTao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


Jeffrey Carter
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3 posted 2000-07-02 03:48 PM


A twinkle, a star,
Hope is there before me,
I  see you, feel  you, near me,

Where ever you are...

Awesome delivery here RH

All my love,
Jeffrey


A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2000-07-02 03:54 PM


Janet ...

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 07-02-2000).]

Denise
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5 posted 2000-07-02 06:41 PM


Wonderful expression of longing with a touch of hope. I absolutely love the last line!

Denise

Mike
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6 posted 2000-07-02 07:14 PM


In the far and distant night...
there comes a falling star,
Streaking to eternity,
On dreams, to where you are.

you certainly live up to your name Romantic Heart...

OLIAS
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7 posted 2000-07-02 07:24 PM


"I look beyond the blue,
For dreams and wishes to come true"

Love the piece, love the line, my favourite, you have the ability to say more with what you dont say as with what you do. If that makes sense. Excellent work I loved it

Olias

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8 posted 2000-07-02 07:32 PM


Romantic one, this is the nicest tribute anyone's ever written to me   Huh? Whaddaya mean?   Well, I can think it's for me if I wanna!  
Corinne
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state of confusion
9 posted 2000-07-02 07:35 PM


I know this feeling, soulmates in eternity that is how it was meant to be.

One of your best yet, btw.

Corinne

Lone Wolf
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10 posted 2000-07-02 07:44 PM


RH,

Love this one my friend.  
I see too . . .

LW


Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.
--William Wordsworth

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
11 posted 2000-07-03 02:36 AM


Marie...glad you could feel it! Thanks!
Janet...Thanks Janet, never give up hope!
Jeffery...Thank you  for your comments!
Denise..the last line is my favorite too!
Mike...did  you  write that? wow! finish..more please!
Olias...I think I understand your understanding!Thank You!!
Balladeer...Hee...your funny, why yes you  can!Thanks!!!
Corrine...My heart exactly!!!Thank you!
Lone...Glad you see!!!  and have hope Thanks!

CocoBaci
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12 posted 2000-07-03 02:38 AM


Oh, how I had a tear on this one
A lovely poem you've shared tonite
Coco  

Jamie
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Blue Heaven
13 posted 2000-07-03 02:51 AM


Sometimes even hope sheds a tear.
wonderful poem
jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
14 posted 2000-07-03 03:51 AM


Such feeling and longing, beautiful work!

God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



tracie66
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15 posted 2000-07-03 03:55 AM


Wonderful expression of such tender longing, very well written
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
16 posted 2000-07-03 11:37 AM


Images of our lover's kiss,
Aching arms wanting to hold,
Untold stories to be told,


A dream captured in the heart will find it's destination more often than one trapped in the mind.  I wish for yours to be soon. You touched me with this one as you knew you would.  Well done, worth the wait.

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
17 posted 2000-07-03 01:36 PM


Coco..thank you for your encouragement, it is needed at the moment!

Jamie...Yes hope does shed a tear!Thank you!

Eagle one...The deepest way I could describe longing!Thank you!

Tracie...Thanks for your beatiful words!

Mark...Thanks for the wisdom and encouragement!Glad it touched you!


Justbleu
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18 posted 2000-07-03 01:47 PM


Oh Wow, this is kinda stuff that eats me up inside!!  I loved this!!  Very cool!!! Sad but sweet!!  Can relate here!! Take Care
Bridgette  


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
19 posted 2000-07-03 11:58 PM


Justblu...thank you, yes this stuff is killing me inside too!
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