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I See You, Feel You, Near me |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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As the clouds stroll across the sky, I look beyond the blue, For dreams and wishes to come true, Every second I see, You and me, Floating on a dream of eternity, Visions of my imaginations, Run wild and free, Forever you and me, I see your poems, The words you express, My heart filled with completeness, Images of our lovers kiss, Aching arms wanting to hold, Untold stories to be told, As the sun slowly sets, The sky lights up with diamonds, I am here, alone and crying, Wanting you evermore, A tear falls to the ground, Up into the sky is found, A twinkle, a star, Hope is there before me, I see you, feel you, near me, Wherever you are... [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 07-03-2000).] |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
I saw and felt this one...great longing, with a touch of hope. Great work RH  Marie~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
excellent... longing, desire,ache,kisses under stars, hope... all the good stuff  great work RH take care JM ps would you please E-mail me, wanted to ask you something... i dont have your addy, mines up there when you have time... thanks, jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
A twinkle, a star, Hope is there before me, I see you, feel you, near me, Where ever you are... Awesome delivery here RH All my love, Jeffrey |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Janet ... [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 07-02-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful expression of longing with a touch of hope. I absolutely love the last line! Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
In the far and distant night... there comes a falling star, Streaking to eternity, On dreams, to where you are. you certainly live up to your name Romantic Heart... |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
"I look beyond the blue, For dreams and wishes to come true" Love the piece, love the line, my favourite, you have the ability to say more with what you dont say as with what you do. If that makes sense. Excellent work I loved it Olias |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Romantic one, this is the nicest tribute anyone's ever written to me Huh? Whaddaya mean?  Well, I can think it's for me if I wanna!  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I know this feeling, soulmates in eternity that is how it was meant to be. One of your best yet, btw. Corinne |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
RH, Love this one my friend. I see too . . . LW Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Marie...glad you could feel it! Thanks! Janet...Thanks Janet, never give up hope! Jeffery...Thank you for your comments! Denise..the last line is my favorite too! Mike...did you write that? wow! finish..more please! Olias...I think I understand your understanding!Thank You!! Balladeer...Hee...your funny, why yes you can!Thanks!!! Corrine...My heart exactly!!!Thank you! Lone...Glad you see!!! and have hope Thanks! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh, how I had a tear on this one A lovely poem you've shared tonite Coco |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Sometimes even hope sheds a tear. wonderful poem jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Such feeling and longing, beautiful work! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Wonderful expression of such tender longing, very well written Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Images of our lover's kiss, Aching arms wanting to hold, Untold stories to be told, A dream captured in the heart will find it's destination more often than one trapped in the mind. I wish for yours to be soon. You touched me with this one as you knew you would. Well done, worth the wait. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Coco..thank you for your encouragement, it is needed at the moment! Jamie...Yes hope does shed a tear!Thank you! Eagle one...The deepest way I could describe longing!Thank you! Tracie...Thanks for your beatiful words! Mark...Thanks for the wisdom and encouragement!Glad it touched you! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Oh Wow, this is kinda stuff that eats me up inside!! I loved this!! Very cool!!! Sad but sweet!! Can relate here!! Take Care Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Justblu...thank you, yes this stuff is killing me inside too! |
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