Open Poetry #8 |
Dusk |
OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Dusk 5-7-5 Tree stands accusing, Skys precarious balance, Hard, topples twilight. Olias |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Olias~ A lovely, well-executed Haiku. Enjoyed the vision. Morning comes in full glory Ah, day has begun ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Thanks Marge, and thank you for the dawn, best time of the day. Regards Olias |
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