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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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love came back when i least expected its help. it's a lie to think that birds and flowers are happiness. i love her in all her dark splendor, not for what you can sell in cards. i love her for who she is, for who i am, too. love came back when i least expected it. it came back to hold me in the sun. even in the rain, i was warm and dry. love came back to fly. i thank god for another try. i'm glad love was in her eyes. love came back when i least expected it. i never thought i'd know her hand. and i guess i never will. but i finally understand. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"i love her in all her dark splendor," Indeed, can there not be splendor in the darkness of love? Love how you share your thoughts here, Mike. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
i love her in all her dark splendor, ------------- i love her for who she is, for who i am, too. love came back when i least expected it. it came back to hold me in the sun. even in the rain, i was warm and dry. love came back to fly. i thank god for another try. i'm glad love was in her eyes. love came back when i least expected it. i never thought i'd know her hand. and i guess i never will. but i finally understand. ---------------------- I wish you could see the smile on my face right now my poet king... butterfly slippers thinks she could actually fly just from the grace of that last verse alone ... "i never thought i'd know her hand. and i guess i never will. but i finally understand." awesome- my sweet squirrel...perfection all that is left to say is ... man, I just LOVE when you write like this later-wise-man of poetry-gator  jm/bs What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
All women have a special gland which causes them to ALWAYS do things when they are least expected. We have to live with it.....and. in your case. it sounds like happily |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks for your kind replies, all.  Mike |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely!!!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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