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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri

0 posted 2000-07-01 05:02 PM


Words can't express this
   love I have for you
But words are all I have
   to try.
So if I sometimes stumble
   over my thoughts
I hope you will be
   patient with me
And hear with your heart
   this rambling voice
Trying to pull magic
   out of simple words
Like I love you.

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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
1 posted 2000-07-08 12:46 PM


one more time thru
Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-07-09 02:48 AM


The magic is there
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2000-07-09 09:29 AM



  I enjoy your style........

  This is beautiful, and uncluttered.....

  It's like a sweet memory...it stays with
       you long after you read it....



Paint your words upon the eager waiting canvas of my heart.....~Sunny1~

Paula Finn
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Posts 5546
missouri
4 posted 2000-07-09 09:54 AM


Mark...you are the magic

Sunny...thank you you always say such good things abt my stuff

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