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Snow Whispers |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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Snow whispers softly fly 'Pon rivers of icy breath... Time trickles silver-blue Speaking quietly of death... Frozen earth lays barren Like the meadows of my soul... Ghosts of sunshine weep While muted emptiness grows... Myriad dewdrops fill the sky And sleep with velvet night... Almost can I see your eyes Shimmering among their light... Yet Heaven gives no sign of you O'er this stretch of white... And alone among the pearled drifts I cry for you tonight... The snow whispers of my past And numbs me to the core... Lost within the clouds of ice My heart dreams nevermore... *Krista Knutson* "We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Alwye~ this is hauntingly beautiful and sad.  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Absolutely beautiful!!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Krista: This is a beautifully expressed poem, chilling and very sad to read. The last stanza just grabbed hold of me, I know all too well how it feels. Excellent piece as always Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
A beautiful, sorrowful poem.. "Myriad dewdrops fill the sky And sleep with velvet night... Almost can I see your eyes Shimmering among their light..." "The snow whispers of my past And numbs me to the core... Lost within the clouds of ice My heart dreams nevermore..." Now in my mind, those verses are ones that imprint themselves upon your soul, a capture of emotion, of life... Loved this much, dearie Abrahm Simons "Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
stunningly beautiful... and just the perfect thing for this sultry July day.. wonderful writing K, as always...perfection of imagery later-prodigy-gator  jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all so very much, I am honored by your wonderful replies. *Krista Knutson* "We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krista~ Almost too beautiful ! You capture me with the beauty of your thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Wonderful imagery here, Alwye! Corinne |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Krista, the tragedy is alive in this beautiful poem! So well written! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful though sad. Well concieved images of the down side portrayed with the comfort of metaphorical release. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Whenever I click on one of your poems, I expect to find a beautifully written piece. Certainly, no exception here. A wonderful poem. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"Lost within the clouds of ice My heart dreams nevermore" Krista, this is a wonderful piece. I can relate to it extremely well... "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all, I am very grateful for your replies! *Krista Knutson* "We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~ |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
This is exceptional writing...your words are chilling and very vivid. I could feel this one... Marie~ |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
I have to dig deeper and deeper for your poems that I missed... grr! Wonderful job Krissa. Beautiful and sad. Great poem! "The universe is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper." Eden Phillpotts *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Krista, Beautiful and mournful poem...fantastic imagery! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Your imagery is worthy of a canvas full of paint hanging in the louvre of life. I felt every tear you shed over this one. Great job. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
The imagery and sentiments in this poem are just breath-taking Krista! Beautiful and flowing thoughts ... your closing was simply wonderful! Well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Brought a tear to my eye, this one is cold and sad and hauntingly beautiful at the same time. |
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