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Independence (Acrostic) |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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This was very hard...I have been working on it since I saw the first Acrostic posted.....very challenging.....i think I could have done better...but decided to post anyway...Please enjoy.. I sort of left it open to WONDER about at the end.... Integrity above all Newfound freedom Diversity from the fall Enticing your soul Pronouncing you whole Endearing to your mind New worlds to find Dividing the tides Escaping the storm Newly reborn Calculating risk Entering the abyss Independence is so many things to us all tearing down the berlin wall fighting for justice and peace on earth these are the prices of freedoms worth so when you hang your hat at home remember the dream the country the men remember when....... Julie :) |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JulieAnn~ I think this is fantastic! I think you did a great job.... I've only done one like this but I don't know if there are rules for this kind as in a Haiku, are there?  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Brilliant!!!!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i have tried a few acrostic and i nearly tore my hair to pieces in frustration LOL from one aspiring poet to another, i must say that this was very well done...I ENJOYED  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
JulieAnn, you did a very admirable job here. Nice Going!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, very well done, Julie! Denise |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Julie you have done so very well with this acrostic...good on you Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JulieAnn~ Well done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very cool JA.. you did a fantastic job... you took on acrostic and rhyme... very good work with a perfect theme for the spirit of this holiday take care jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is not something i have ever attempted but you did such a fine job on this JulieAnn. It says so much and from one who spent years in a military environment words like these are always appreciated |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Wow Julie Excellent poem, really enjoyed this. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
JulieAnn, your acrostic is just perfect the way it is, well written with wonderfully expressed thoughts! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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