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nona
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0 posted 2000-07-01 11:15 AM



Rapture

Let the music touch your soul,
submerge you in its rapture,
Drift and glide on the currents
of feelings it can capture.

Allow the emotions to immerse you
and lead you to a level you seldom
get to go.

Savior it's essence,let it transform
you, if only for the moment,
for in doing so you come away
a richer person.

For you have been nurtured by the
melody of Angels and felt their
sensous ecstasy of just being.
...................................nona.


© Copyright 2000 Nona-Madonna Neumann - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-07-01 11:19 AM


A wonderful symphony of words Nona ... to be lost in the music ... such a wonderful place to be!  Nicely penned!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Honeybee
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2 posted 2000-07-01 11:45 AM


~Nona~

Very well expressed, as an avid music lover of all genres, I too feel the same way about the magical powers of music.  I couldn't survive in this world without it!  This is a unique, creative poem, thanks for posting it.  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly

nona
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since 2000-03-03
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3 posted 2000-07-01 12:16 PM


been a while since I have posted. Have been developing my web page and entering stories in my family tree. While I was picking out the music to go along with the stories of family this demanded to come out.Thought I had lost it for a while.Always good to see what you are writing is actually understood by someone else.  Thanks for validating me.
JulieAnn
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4 posted 2000-07-01 12:33 PM


A lover of music since I was a little girl I know ho wit feels to get  lost in the music. You have expressed this well here...great poem!!  

Julie :)



brian madden
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5 posted 2000-07-01 12:49 PM


"the music is your special friend
Dance on fire as it intends
Music is your only friend
Until the end" sorry I have been listening to the Doors a lot lately.

A wonderful poem on the magic of music.

For you have been nurtured by the
melody of Angels and felt their
sensous ecstasy of just being.



A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....
6 posted 2000-07-01 03:19 PM


Being lost in music sure is amazing!
Great poem!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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